Feb 16, 2011

95

each drop of
cold water
on the brow
painted my toes
black-and-blue

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yjfvv8qeHlU
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4 comments:

  1. BrianFebruary 16, 2011 at 9:50 AM

    Rather harrowing imagery here, Chico. A frightening but extremely well-crafted poem in English, its rhythms impeccable.

    Unfortunately, the video is unavailable in my country using the above url.

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  2. ChiFebruary 16, 2011 at 10:14 AM

    Sorry about the vid. It was a song by Pink, called Sober.

    Had this awful image this morning, not knowing why and how exactly. I blame this to the madly changing season :-)

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  3. Kay TracyFebruary 23, 2011 at 2:10 PM

    What a beautiful blog site! The formatting is lovely. The colors coat your theme perfectly like melted chocolate. And I love the number system for your poetry.

    Chocolate pudding is what I'm eating right now. Much needed chocolate.

    Your poem. Honest and unsettling in ways that I like. I look forward to reading more of your work!

    ~Kay

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  4. ChiFebruary 23, 2011 at 4:20 PM

    Thank you so much for your chocolate covered comment ;-)

    Please drop by for a bit of sweet'n bitter chicolate again.

    Chico

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