Dec 3, 2011

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sounds from
the full
righteous lips
pierced the tip of
the disfigured ears
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  1. BrianDecember 4, 2011 at 5:08 AM

    This poem is enigmatic. It makes me wonder just how "righteous" the words are that those "full" lips speak? They only strike the tips of the disfigured ears but do not enter them. Is this a fault of the ears or the not quite so righteous speaker of the words? Hmmm...

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  2. ChiDecember 4, 2011 at 9:14 AM

    Thanks, Brian. I have changed "my" to "the" for more to wonder. Your questions are spot on the ones that have puzzling me :-)

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