Nov 24, 2010

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from the moment
our gaze met
nothing can
set it apart
even space-time

2 comments:

  1. Chico,

    A heartfelt poem.

    It builds and builds. The fifth line has the most weight.

    Chen-ou

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  2. Chen-ou,

    Thank you so much for your comment. It would help my words to grow.I really appreciate it.

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