Nov 29, 2010

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thread by thread
our silky web
has woven
it takes a whim
to snip
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  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐December 4, 2010 at 8:34 AM

    Chico,

    The lower verse is weak, leaving little room for the reader to ponder.

    Just a thought.

    Chen-ou

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